In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is often claimed that having a home instead of renting one is more crucial for people. There are many either positive or negative reasons leading to this mentality. While I accept that possessing a special place to call home is a blessing.
One reason why people insist on having their own home is that it can make them feel more stable. To be specific, as a human, they need a home to recharge their batteries after working hours, which may create a sense of belonging and improve mental health. For instance, in Vietnam, it is often advised by the ancestors to settle down before pursuing a career since they have learnt that being mentally stable is a fundamental principle of success. Moreover, home possession can be considered as a good way to save personal assets.To explain, in some big cities, people invest money into lands and houses as immovable properties since their value grows constantly. For example, in Hanoi where properties are as precious as gold due to high population density, many citizens buy them for savings. As a result, people find owning a home is important to their lives.
Despite these, others still hesitate to possess a home as they have to pay for housing tax. To explain, they consider housing tax an unreasonable fee because the house already belongs to them. Therefore, they do not want to waste their money on it. However, housing tax is published by the government to protect national lands and equality in distributing properties between different social classes. Clearly, it is ill founded to state that.
In conclusion, people like it better when owning a home than renting one because it helps them stay stable and it can be an effective way to save money. Personally, I believe having a place of your own is a good thing, and calling it home makes your place even more special.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8164556962 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56534532474 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9778594771 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23060696927 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743469873107 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607236566286 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140832239896 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635813247482 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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