In some cultures, old age is more valued, while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A few cultures allocate a higher value to the elderly people while others give more importance to the youth. In my opinion, I think both young and old have expertise in different domains and they should be valued accordingly.
On the one hand, older people tend to play an important role in a time where the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. Not only does this trend benefit grandparents directly who find that this is an important aspect of their lives, but also their grandchildren considerably. This is mainly because the elderly are familiar with traditional culture, they can uphold moral values to pass on to the younger generation, playing the key role in preservation of cultural identity, which is fading in the era of globalization. Besides, compared with young people, retirees are more financially comfortable and find pleasure in voluntary work for the sake of the whole society, and thus, make several positive contributions to the community. For example, nowadays, there are more and more groups of elderly people established to provide free education for disadvantaged children or to clean the environment.
On the other hand, youngsters have tremendous energy and can assume a leadership role to lead a culture in a new direction. Firstly, as young people have been exposed to conditions that are largely different from the ones that existed in the past, they are now more creative, adaptive, and able to find its destiny with a new perspective. Thus, they are said to be the better future of any society. Besides, the elderly members of a community are sometimes too rigid and resist any necessary change. These are transformed only once the youth is given the power to introduce a positive change. For instance, the idea related to gender inequality of older times has become intolerable in today’s world. Many social movements like the “Me Too movement” is an great example of the youth trying to eradicate the gender gap that prevents women from climbing up the corporate ladder and taking control of their own lives.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that both young and old people are valuable as a happy society needs the guidance of the elderly in a few areas and the youth’s energy to transform in other domains.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97686375321 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7855009608 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560411311054 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6526811379 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.066666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188559360699 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616303671325 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812506676897 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141678974803 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114471430543 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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