In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?
Attracting qualified teachers to rural schools has been one of the biggest challenges in some developing countries and this has been partly responsible for the poor educational qualification of rural students. There are many reasons for this such as inadequate schooling and housing facilities, low salary, fewer advancement opportunities, etc.
First of all, the lack of teaching materials and equipment such as libraries, laboratories, computers, internet would make it much harder for teachers to perform their work, and this consequently results in a poor outcome. Improper accommodation and health services are also the reasons to cause them to stay away from remote schools. Additionally, as qualified and experienced teachers, they are more likely to have well-paid positions and more advancement opportunities city schools but in countryside schools, this is more unlikely.
To solve this problem, it would be the government's responsibility to have great support for teachers who work in remote schools as well as build up educational policies in their favour. For instance, teachers in countryside would get higher payment and better housing. Besides, more investment should also be spent in infrastructure and teaching sources in countryside schools to create better schooling facilities for distant students.
In conclusion, there are many reasons to keep good teachers away from rural schools but the primary one, in my view, are poor schooling infrastructure, unsuitable accommodation and undesirable wages, and these problems should be firstly and properly tacked by the government to draw more qualified teachers to rural schools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7004048583 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17509072851 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566801619433 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9943797164 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.444444444 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156880021406 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066597411904 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671112885926 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105948348814 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438541808458 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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