Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In order to have something to play with, large number of toys are often bought by some parents to their kids. In my opinion, certain toys could bring advantages to children's brain development. However, toys could also trigger bad habit for kids, like lazy and anti social life.
Majority of people believe that toys is an alternative way in supporting children's brain development process. From what I have read, several complex games board would demand kids to focus in winning the mission. Moreover, they need to equip their analytical thinking skills and the most effective strategy to complete the toys mission. By this situation, the brain cells would grow further and would lead the kids to get larger brain memory capacity. They tend to have a good memory and be capable to solve the problem and challenges in daily lives.
By contrast, intensively playing toys could lead to an addiction and bad habits. For instance, children would enjoy to spend their time to play and not completing their homework. It would be bad for their grade. They will be lazy to study since it is boring for them. In another cases, they prefer to stay at home than playing with other friends outside. They tend to suffer from anti social life. They are not used to communicate or interact with people who lead to have an introvert characteristic. Parents should make playing time duration to prevent kids in getting worse behavior.
In conclusion, I believe that toys could support brain development which then lead to gain a better brain capacity to memorize. However, if playing duration could not be controlled by parents, children will suffer from worse behavior such as lazy and anti social life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'toys'' or 'toy's'?
Suggestion: toys'; toy's
...most effective strategy to complete the toys mission. By this situation, the brain c...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
...ad habits. For instance, children would enjoy to spend their time to play and not completing t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95438596491 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46123781813 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5544914669 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238445242563 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789605824894 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710244041232 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155267674001 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887706380008 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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