Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
It is true that some parents are overly permissive to demand of children and that is tend to spoil their children instead of educate them properly. In my opinion, this parenting style could be lead to various long-term negative consequences
Parents should create some discipline for their children if they would like to have kind kids. Firstly, a family is the first environment that children live with prior the social environment, so the limitation is necessary for them to know how to control themselves with misbehaved actions. Secondly, enforcing children into the discipline is the good way to regulate their desires, develop their self – conscious. If parents constantly nurture all their requirements, children would do more bad than good in the future.
The children of indulgent and lenient parents are likely to grow up with several negative personality traits. The first and the most obvious is they will become more self – centred who shows a little consideration for the feelings and needs of others. As the result, they are unable to collaborate successfully with the others at work, school, and another social relationship. The second negative trait in such people might be impulsiveness. They have never lived under any boundaries, so they might not be patient in making a decision at work, over-spent in the shopping, unwise in a financial decision, even lead to anti-social norms.
In conclusion, parents should be aware of undouble drawbacks if they consistently endure their children’s demand without control and I do believe that they should educate strictly their children to help them develop positive traits since they were young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2734082397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85286088777 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0686133469 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458833523404 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164853351622 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111746750069 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287056157241 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760599279045 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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