There is no doubt that being in present is good instead of taking stress about upcoming time and thinking about the past. Some people consider it important to know about their ancestors whereas o believe that people should focus on present and future period of time. I will support the argument that knowing about family history plays an significant role.
On the one hand, some people argue that everyone should think about their present and upcoming time for considerable reasons. Firstly, with to the passage of time people are being changed their minds towards making more money in order to make their future bright. Consequently, they have become busy in daily work and only focus on what is going on currently rather than preceding period. Secondly, today is the world of competition as everyone intends to know where he or she stands among people around them. As a result, they work hard in the present time to get success in upcoming time as well as they regards it their success in life. Finally, knowing about history is not considered important as everyone new inventions are coming and people are under influence of technology they could not even think about using old methods of work and life can not be imagine without technical advancements in these days. Therefore, people tends to concentrate on future because everyone has to change themselves according to time for surviving in this competitive era.
On the other hand, I believe that knowing about origin is significant in order to getting success in the life. First of all, if people have knowledge about ancestors then they could be able to know that from where they come and how unique they are among other people. To exemplify, some people get motivation from their ancestors as they used to fight in big wars as a warriors and got success. As a consequence, people become motivated from family history and they put hands to work for their society to bring positively and provides guidance to the young generation.
To conclude, although thinking about present and future is important in today’s materialistic world yet I think that knowing about our family origin is important to take purpose of life in some situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, i think, no doubt, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95417789757 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50627767261 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498652291105 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3649115709 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.533333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174462126659 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713885965075 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050761376401 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119566735365 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287948111395 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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