Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Tourism industry has been become a major financial resource of many countries. While many people believe that tourism activities deliver a numerous of advantages to nations, other opponents argue that this industry can cause many catastrophic impacts to societies. To have a clearer understanding about this controversial issue, this essay will examine these views aforementioned and also provide my opinions about it.
Undoubtedly, tourism industry has delivered many positive influences to the development of a nation’ economy, besides this, it encourages cultural exchanges between different countries. First of all, this sector is the main factor which promotes the increase and growth of other services that are its subsets. Airline services, for example, are encouraged a lot by the development of tourism. This service type have become more bigger when the demand for travelling of people rising. Furthermore, tourism activities also support cultural exchanges between countries. Travelling in Sapa town in Vietnam is a typical story for this, when coming to the town, foreigners and even domestic travelers will witness a lot of distinctive cultural characteristics of Mong and Dao people there. These special things might make them curious and be attracted more, therefore, these people can research and acquire more indigenous knowledge about the diverse cultures of Vietnam.
Despite these advantages mentioned, many people have a very different idea that tourism industry can bring a variety of environmental damages and especially it can be a cause of spreading dangerous diseases. Worryingly, these negative impacts are brought about by tourists’ movements and their lack of understanding about folk cultures of tourist areas. Hence, they might destroy wild-life animals or plant when arriving new tourist destinations. Another concern that travelers can bring with them many strange and hazardous virus strains which can harm local environments and communities. These problems, however, can be controlled if governments and authorities plan and have a sustainable and strong developing strategy to guarantee the effectiveness of this economic sector.
All in all, it is obvious that tourism industry plays a critical role in any nation’s economy. It assists to promote other services and cultural exchanges between nations. Besides these crucial impacts, many people are worried that this economic sector might causes harmful impacts to environments and it can be a main reason which spreads dangerous epidemics. Even so, based on its benefits which are provided in this essay, personally, I believe that tourism’s advantages are extremely important and they outweigh its drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
... tourism. This service type have become more bigger when the demand for travelling of peopl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ese problems, however, can be controlled if governments and authorities plan and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, even so, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72345679012 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01536986428 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1089483789 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930778362717 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318961014639 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301895667193 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068248503378 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313754511418 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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