Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students.
Discuss these views. Which views do you agree with? Explain why.
Nobody can deny that education system play a vital part in the development of each country. While some people claim that university or college education should be available only to gifted students, I whole-heartedly believe that all students are entitled to receive higher education.
First and foremost, it is certainly true that being able to pursue a bachelor degree is not an undemanding task, which can handle by just students who are accustomed to working hard in terms of learning. Many students can not meet the demand of university education or do not have a good command of knowledge and skills of the field they study and are not capable of finding a suitable job for themselves. As a result, people want it to be more selective with students accepted to university or college with the aim of improving educational outcomes, helping the society have skilled workers and professionals and reducing the unemployment rate each year.
Nevertheless, I personally think that all young people can have chance to get a higher education. People should be treated equally and without discrimination. The right for students to study whatever they want should not be restricted only for intellectual students. If students meet the admission criteria, they will definitely be able to pursue and achieve their goals in advanced levels much as they are not classified as intelligent students. Moreover, not all students who always get good marks is aptitude for succeeding in higher education. Despite their intelligence, they are not good at some specific skills which is always acquired in specialized fields.
To sum up, from my point of view, everyone should be able to continue their study to higher levels.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1541218638 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90860159844 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.173468983 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352436265346 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127297238635 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10716217882 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219104254441 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967953431914 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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