Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, artificial intelligence draws more and more attention from the public and meanwhile arouses interests from numerous computer programmers and application developers. As a consequence, there has been a heated debate on whether artificial intelligence, or AI for aberration, has a positive or negative influence on our future. From my own perspective, this is far from a black and white questions. In the process of exploring the unknown, one shall be prudent with the unforeseen consequences. In terms of AI, though this cutting-edge technology has already brought us human being some pleasant outcomes, we still need to avoid blinded positivity about its prospect.
Undoubtedly, AI creates a new era for our society. With an increasing number of businesses and professions participating in developing and advancing this technology, we have witnessed a gigantic jump in productivity, efficiency and an extraordinary optimization in resources distribution, such as raw materials and time allocation. From my personal experience as an intern in a consultancy company last summer, I noticed that applying advanced technology, such as AI, save a significant number of employees from tedious work. In the near future, this company is planning to launch a new program to train AI to calculate tax reduction to facilitate employees to have a better understanding with their salaries and investments.
However, apart from the bright sight. There exist nonnegligible risk embracing with the benefits. One of the most direct and obvious consequences is the potential drop of employment rate. A resent research conducted by the media giant, Bloomberg, shows that AI will replace human from half of professions in approximately 30 years provided the technology will be developing at the same speed as right now. The majority of sci-fi fictions also assume a devastating future about highly intelligent machines taking charge of our plant due to their immediate absorption of new knowledge and non-exhausted energy.
In conclusion, I do think AI will benefit human beings because of its incompatible performance and excellent capacity to finish heavy workload without any complaints. However, at the meantime, we need to be alert and critical with the potential risks and side effects an intelligent robot can bring us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50277777778 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28190770892 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2797268137 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8125 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161396187904 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458101951864 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448270016246 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912617973316 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370843516412 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.