Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In life, people face various challenging situations where they have to make life-altering decisions. Some people claim that accepting their current state and not trying for further development is the most favourable way, while for the proponents of improvement as well as me are of the opinion that making changes in our dissatisfactory life is the only way to achieve success.
A host of job related issues include unsatisfactory salary, lack of incentive to work in the organization, unfriendly bosses or tedious and repetitive tasks. If an employee, facing these challenges does not have a willpower to change this situation for his benefit, he is likely to develop certain health-related problems such as stress and anxiety. Because being dissatisfied with one's job and constantly overthinking about these challenges harms their overall well-being. Provided that they try to make improvements in their current situation at the workplace by talking with the manager or quitting this job and searching for a better one, they can once again develop passion for life and work.
Financial problems is another sgnificant situation many people face in their life. There are some people who can accept the fact that they cannot afford certain products and facilities such as a car or an apartment. Because they only try to make a living for only basic necessities as food and clothes. Hovewer, others find out opportunities where they can increase their income level and improve their life conditions. While the first type soon becomes demotivated and develops dissatisfaction with life, the other can improve their lifestyle for better side very soon. For this reason, persisting relentlessly for achieving success in one's life always gives motivation and willing to live the life to its fullest potential.
To conclude, negative situations as unsatisfactory working conditions and lack of income may bring health problems and demotivation in life. To avoid this, individuals should change their current conditions and try to make improvements as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9238055772 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 325.0 20.2975951904 1601% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1711.0 106.682146367 1604% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 325.0 20.7667163134 1565% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.0 7.06120827912 736% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191083707751 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191083707751 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125491124988 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192904062634 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 165.8 13.0946893788 1266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -266.86 50.2224549098 -531% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 131.2 11.3001002004 1161% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.71 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.59 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 132.0 10.1190380762 1304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 132.0 10.7795591182 1225% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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