There are disputed opinion regarding the critical situation of life where according to a group of thinkers, acceptance of harsh condition and financial crisis is a better while few opine that doing hard work and find a way to overcome is a wise decision. These both view have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my opinion both the sides are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
Discussing the former opinion, the foremost argument the proponents put forward is that one can easily discourage and disappointed in a rush to earn more money. At a certain time in the life, neither a vast sum of currency nor better postion in the organisation could be responsible for a happy and healthy life; if one can ability to ignore such a misconception than he have a great sleep at night. Nowaday the harmony of life can easily distroyed by showing the salary of other better salaried person or properties of someone; but, no one have developed mind to think about sadness of its owner. A recent survey on the happiness index carried out by The Times Of India has concluded that majority of developed western countries are less happier than developing country however they have developed economy. In short, without accept current stage of life we can not enjoy our present.
On the flip side some counter claim that the chance of betterment by a great effort is worthwhile. Nowadays we lives materialistic and consumerism era; hence, we have always strong desire to have ownership of particular things. For this point of view it would be a acceptable to earn money by finding any possible way. There are plenty of opprtunities in 21st century to boost our remunaration. On the other hand people not only appriciated by members of society, but also earn a respect if promoting in a upward post in company. Individuals from government department like Police, Crime Branch, Electricity, Research, Investigation and hospitals are usually in debate and have a good name and fame across their relatives and friend circle.
To summarise and give my opinion, weather seat with whatever we have or attempts to do it better is totally based on the nature of person. Good job could be pleasure for one but not for another who like less ordinary lifestyle. If pondered, I personally love to enjoy my life at present without thinking about future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... to ignore such a misconception than he have a great sleep at night. Nowaday the har...
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Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less happy'?
Suggestion: less happy
...rity of developed western countries are less happier than developing country however they ha...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...great effort is worthwhile. Nowadays we lives materialistic and consumerism era; henc...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ngs. For this point of view it would be a acceptable to earn money by finding any...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...but also earn a respect if promoting in a upward post in company. Individuals fro...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oss their relatives and friend circle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9416909621 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79301204524 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644314868805 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2391206037 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145374270353 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448726519998 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331755244569 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953494596955 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316500530169 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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