Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
some people think that it is better to live with some negative things like an unpleasant job or lack of money while some others believe that we should learn how to overcome the bad situations. This essay will discuss both these views but personally, I am convinced that we should try our best to solve some daily problems and improve bad situations.
There are several reasons why we should accept a bad situation. The first and the most important reason is instead of give up we should learn how to accept them. For instance, if we have a job that have bad conditions, the first thing we should do is adapt instead of think about quit our job. consequences, maybe we will not only find it better than we imagine later but also improve our experiences. Moreover, some people get some situations which they can’t be change so that the best way to make their life become happier is to accept them. For example, many patients have some diseases which can’t be cure like heart diseases or disable in some abilities so it will be better for them if they adapt with their diseases and ignore them instead of feeling upset and try to fix something that impossible during their whole life.
Despite of those above arguments, I am argued that, people should try hard to escape from the bad situations and find their own way to deal with them. A strong point is the only way to improve our life is face with the problems and tackles them. An example is if we want to have a better job with better condition work and higher salary, sometime we might to be very brave to give up and find a new one so that we can escape the bad situation and be comfortable with the another job. Furthermore, when we feel pleasant with our life and don’t want to overcome our problems to reach the higher aims it means we are stopping develop. The development on the planet depend on the creativity and motivation of people who want to make the life become better and easier. Thus, new invention were born and we keep upgrade to make them suitable and more wonderful. so if people find it is not necessary to try and research any new things it mean we will get many serious consequently in the future.
In conclusion, I strongly convinced that, it is necessary for people to try their best to escape the bad situations and improve them. However, sometime we need to be satisfy with our life to be happier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...diseases or disable in some abilities so it will be better for them if they adapt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53225806452 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42229029729 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444700460829 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5103413998 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.705882353 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217494305582 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825589837901 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738325447337 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170206369338 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104388074417 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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