Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A growing number of individuals said that it is good to be provided as much information as possible in business and academic field in order to do scientific research.However, others argued that little information is too crucial to not share. I partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, a great number of people believe that sharing enormous information is a significant method of doing scientific exploration.This is because every recruit has their distinguish concept in head so that it will be easier for them to do analyze in order to accomplish a great outcome. In addition, people will be able to know their pros and cons if they share each other's thought. Apart from these, our globe will witness that this is essentially need to be addressed each other's ideas altogether.If this happens, scientific research would evolve in beneficial notes.
On the contrary, others argued that sharing little information should not to share freely. Hence, the key reason for this,nowadays,the world is more competitive compare to the past that is why every individual thought that this is not a great sign for them to share a lot of information with others because if this happens, their valuable notions will be undermined.Furthermore, every company or recruit has their basic fundamental norms to not share much information with others.For instance, in order to mitigate Covid-19 outbreaks all across the globe, every renowned company came across to innovate vaccine and made it possible.The noticeable factors for that is merely not to share much information so that they became more competitive to make this happen.Therefore, I think both are equally essential for doing research in academic and business field.
To conclude, both views have equal consideration in various way for the betterment of our lives in both field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, i think, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23728813559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20941232815 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.973029161 49.4020404114 443% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.125 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.875 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321506970796 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144245486778 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102517455893 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196263589126 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913087854857 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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