Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news. While others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial view about whether newspaper is the best way to receive news. In this essay, I will examine both sides and offer my opinion.
There are several reasons why some people support newspapers to be the best media. First, information in newspapers is more reliable. During the output, the contents of newspapers should be censored by different reporters and editors with several steps, which can avoid the spread of false information. As a result, people can rely on what they read in newspapers. Second, newspaper is accessible to each person in any age group. Compared with digital devices, newspapers are a kind of printed media, which is easy to read and understand and friendly to the elderly people, who seem to have no ability to use other digital media.
On the other hand, however, it is reasonable that some people choose other kinds of media to receive up-to-date information more effectively. First, television is a common source of information. On television, people can receive information with various forms, such as audio and animation, which can assist people to understand news better as well as arouse their interest of watching news channels. Second, Internet nowadays has become a popular way among people to learn about news. Internet has a large amount of news so that people can find what they want at any time. Besides, when reading news online, people can discuss with other websites users, in which way can help them know more and deeper about the information.
To summarize, there is no doubt that some people choose newspaper as the best way to read news. However, other media such as television and Internet are also effective when people want to learn about news. Therefore, I prefer other ways such as Internet to read news instead of newspapers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...assist people to understand news better as well as arouse their interest of watchi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00996677741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61899400346 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2457664385 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7058823529 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367452111596 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128338724946 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879501055064 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246773092579 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066585969822 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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