When students finished their high school education, they have to make a choice of whether to get a job or continue their education in university. While there are some benefits to get a job straight after their high school, but I would prefer that it is better to study at university before start career.
There is no denying that it is benefit for teenagers to get abundant work experiences if they get a job straight after school; as a consequence, they might get prompted early in their company. In addition, with the money their earned, people are able to afford their houses and cars early which is becoming more and more expensive with time go by. Undoubtedly, people feel happy when they recognize that they have the ability to breed themselves and become independent. Another advantage for people go straight to work is that they might learn a lot of skills which is hardly to get in university.
However, I believe that studying at university or college before go to work is better for young people. Tertiary education brings a clear conception of what is the student study and how to utilize the skills they learned after school by some special curriculum in university. For example, comparing to the confuse of people who do not study at university in choosing job, people who attend university before work are able to know what position they like and what they good at with three or four years study of a certain major in university. Moreover, further education can broaden their horizon and give a better stage to start their career.
For the reason mentioned above, it seems to me that it is likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their education rather than go straight to work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n university. For example, comparing to the confuse of people who do not study at universit...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... do not study at university in choosing job, people who attend university before wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78187919463 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55414983227 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0625025643 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263913269574 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11818196444 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946076331468 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168940968743 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830233128318 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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