Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Many argue that it is essential for kids to attend school while others argue that educating them at home is beneficial. In my opinion, the latter view outweighs the benefits of the former view. In this essay, I shall delve into both methods and provide a supporting point for my thought.
To begin with, at an elementary stage the important values and virtues of life are taught by parents to their toddlers. Moreover, the guidance provided by guardians can help to nurture a child into a responsible person. Apparently, this leads to focused learning in the house which is not possible in school due to abundant noise created by pupils. For instance, nowadays, modern ladies play an active role by spending a lot of time with their infants to teach them new skills at a tender age. Following this, it is also observed that adolescents pursue good habits and a deep understanding of the study materials by their elder siblings. They form a close-knit bond and develop a sense of togetherness amongst them. As an example,statistics show that children with siblings outperform well in their academic grades.
On the other hand, studying in educational institutions helps to enhance interpersonal and social skills. Likewise, participating in school cultural activities boosts confidence and helps to explore other career opportunities. For example, it is found that kids who participate in school functions have good public speaking abilities. Secondly, practical knowledge gained through teaching organizations can prove to be worthy for their development. In particular, some of the lab experiments ought to be performed in schools due to the readily available apparatus. This practical environment cannot be achieved at home.
In conclusion, it is vital for students to gain knowledge in the house as well as visit schools for a stable upbringing and complete development. However, I firmly believe that learning begins at home and in turn, helps the child to achieve success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , statistics
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22884012539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01164689176 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623824451411 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9624835375 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26028414135 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674856937168 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440101604081 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1552691688 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359436953482 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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