Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people contend that the wealth they earn should not be taxed. However, for any country in the world, tax plays the fundamental role in the normal operation of modern society. Thus, I completely disagree with the statement.
Firstly, various government departments at all levels are the key factors to maintain the stability of the society. For example, the police office, which is the most important strength to keep the public safe, rely on the money collected through tax to pay its staff's monthly salaries. If individuals refuse to pay taxes, the police departments may have to shut down, and thereby causing the commotion of the society.
In addition, the tax has always made a contribution to the construction of some fundamental infrastructures, including highways, tunnels and bridges. Such facilities boost the efficiency of economic development, as people can travel longer distance to discover more business opportunities. For example, without the support of the tax, there is no chance that China has experienced a skyrocketing growth in the past decades.
However, the government should be vigilant about the tax rate. If the public are subject to high taxes, they may lose their motivation to work harder and achieve more. As a consequence, the development of the country may be stagnant and the overall tax revenue will finally decrease over time.
Summing up, tax, which is collected from ordinary people, acts as the fundamental strength to sustain social security and advance economy, although addressing excessive tax pressure on the public may a counterproductive outcome. Therefore, the government should figure out proper tax rates towards different people and different products, and thereby mitigating some people's fear about high taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41877256318 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94957557797 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9111831115 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253507916366 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835927558188 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860245876595 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135477620489 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703238534272 0.056905535591 124% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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