Some people believe that using animals as a medical experiment for drugs is harmfull, while some are against this opinion. Discuss both view and give your opinion
Nowadays, there have been controversies about the use of animals as a test run for human medicines painting it as a heartless decision, however, others think is explicit to the medical field at large. I will be discussing in this essays both stances and what I opined.
medicine is particularly an essential act in the life of ill and requires extreme caution, because life's will be at stake if not.
Although the act of using an animal is an experiment is a consequential one, but truth be told. The reason is it's called manslaughter and this act is AG the vertinary low. It is believed that rat is the only creäture that has the same biological makeup as compared to humans. In my opinion, small creatures do not have a life of their own, we in a way find their existence.
For instance, in 1914, there was a published article that said and I quote 'thanks be to God for my pet that saved me from consuming poison'. I was astornished by the content after reading through. Obviously 80% of scientists can not take for granted and can never dislodge the fact that animals are savers when it comes to hypothesis .
Furthermore, performing experiments on little creatures gives us a better mechanisms of actions of a particular drugs, helps us to know the side effects accompanies by each drugs as well as its detrimental combination. I agree with the afore opinion.
In conclusion, some people believe that using an animal as an experiment is manslaughter but I am think that it's a way of saving millions of lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65671641791 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86527645286 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623134328358 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2815545556 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238574383305 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680506409133 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510249112123 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102458049064 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613245823516 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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