Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Every country has their own culture, norms and history and they want to impose them to all rather than adopting others cultur. Some experts say that, visitors must adopt their local culture while traveling their countries, while others argue that, no one force tourist to do anything, they must to free to travel as their wish. I partially agree on this statement and this essay will examine the arguments on both favour and against of the topic.
To begin with, trend of travelling different domestic places and international is increasing day by day in these days and visitors are the one of the main medium to exchange cultural differences between various countries. Most of the tourist want to taste different while travelling various places, so if the law of following local culture of host country is imposed to them, then it may not be wrong. For instance, many tourists travel our country “Nepal” through the year from various country, if they get chance to enjoy our traditional culture then, that can be more unforgettable experience to every visitors. While one of the main purpose of every traveller is to taste different than their regular routine, so providing them various local taste of language, culture, food and drinks and many other available local hospitality service make them more happy. However, it can be beneficial to the host country, to promote own local culture to the world, it can help on country’s economy and increase business of local product as well.
Secondly, as some experts believe that, world is connecting globally, so every country must accept different culture and welcome guests. Every visitor has their own theme to travel and everyone may not be interest to taste differences. However, they must be free to travel with their own interest after paying enough.
In conclusion, travelling different places can be passion for someone or escaping from busy life or relaxation for many others, hence so one can impose anything to them, as they can travel with their own interest and right after paying necessarily. Moreover, host country can provide cultural taste to them as per their requirement and welcome every cultural differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntry is imposed to them, then it may not be wrong. For instance, many tourists tr...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...f every traveller is to taste different than their regular routine, so providing the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11420612813 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57206406136 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49860724234 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6609777191 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.230769231 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204068037443 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915022913272 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539737814022 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136294315951 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029784443044 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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