Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some experts say that, visitors must adopt their local culture while traveling their countries, while others argue that, no one force tourist to do anything, they must to free to travel as their wish. I partially agree on this statement and this essay will examine the arguments on both favour and against of the topic.
To begin with, trend of travelling different domestic places and international is increasing day by day in these days and visitors are the one of the main medium to exchange cultural differences between various countries. Most of the tourist want to taste different while travelling various places, so if the law of following local culture of host country is imposed to them, then it may not be wrong. For instance, many tourists travel our country “Nepal” throughout the year from various country, if they get chance to enjoy our traditional culture then, that can be more unforgettable experience to every visitors. While one of the main purpose of every travellers is to taste different than their regular routine, so providing them various local taste of language, culture, food and drinks and many other available local hospitality service make them more happy. However, it can be beneficial to the host country, to promote own local culture to the world, to upgrade country’s economy and increase business of local product as well.
Secondly, as some experts believe that, world is connecting globally, so every country must accept different culture and welcome guests. Every visitor has their own theme to travel and everyone may not be interest to taste differences. However, they must be free to travel with their own interest after paying enough.
In conclusion, travelling different places can be passion for someone or escaping from busy life or relaxation for many others, hence no one can impose anything to them, however, they can travel with their own interest and right after paying necessarily. Moreover, host country can provide cultural taste to them as per their requirement and welcome every cultural differen
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-05-21 | ngthanh1220@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2022-06-08 | qminh. | 78 | view |
| 2022-06-08 | qminh. | 61 | view |
| 2022-01-18 | Lê Quỳnh Mai | 84 | view |
| 2021-11-06 | niloya | 73 | view |
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 73
- You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more 67
- The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wher 84
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year 2016 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... one force tourist to do anything, they must to free to travel as their wish. I partial...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... every travellers is to taste different than their regular routine, so providing the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60635479543 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8584988273 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194988779833 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878081992954 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548393180375 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123445183919 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366246990624 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.