Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Although recycling the waste produced at home will not take a long time, some people don’t recycle enough waste at their homes. Therefore, I believe enacting laws by the government to require all people to recycle their waste is necessary.
To begin with, laws can force all the people to recycle, or they will be punished. For those who are reluctant to recycle waste, they will begin recycling their waste for fear of being punished. While social media can promote recycling as well, not all people pay much attention to this suggestion, especially those senior citizens who do not read newspapers or use the smartphones. Even if the young have seen the suggestion in the TV program, there will be some who don’t take that seriously and sill throw their wastes into the dustbins without selecting the recycled ones.
Besides, laws can enhance the awareness of protecting the environment among the public. Much more attention will be paid to the worsening environment as soon as laws concerning home waste are published. More people will tend to change their lifestyles, such as taking the bus or subway to commute instead of driving private cars. In the supermarket, more people will carry bags made of cloth rather than plastic. All these contribute to a better environment and a healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, in order to effectively require all people to recycle waste at home, laws are in great need to ask all citizens to form good habits of protecting the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03212851406 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67207440263 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5030119389 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326440554889 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128553407597 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084332986826 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218317676495 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806809212579 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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