some people consider price as most important things to think about when buying products (such as cell phones) or a service (e.g medical treatment). do you agree or di agree.
considering a cost for buying fancy electronic devices such as mobile phones or caring a health, doing expensive treatment is the most vital thing to suppose. I totally agree with the statement, one should be conscious about the prices of things or equipment before buying.
firstly, as technology changes day by day, and new product launches. buying of expensive mobile is a waste of money because, on one hand after using it for a few months when a new technology is integrated into the market on the other hand price automatically depleted. however, technology itself is an addiction and falling in the updated device is craze.despite the fact, as technology grows the cost decreases. but almost the functions of the mobile phone remains the same.
for instance according to a new market survey, on Samsung smartphones shows that company releases new smartphones after every few months in every series of Samsung mobile phones like note series, galaxy series, and J series and the prices of one version old phones approximately falls up to 45 %, which is a great loss of money, in fact, the functions remain the same with few changes in body type .
secondly, medical treatment is necessary for good health. but nowadays where health issues increase day to day there a medical practitioner take off a good amount from patients pocket. Considering the cost of treatment the patient should go toward the government hospitals. none of the less all medical facilities are available there same doctors will be there, instead, of charging heavy feeses in private clinics there is free treatment .on one hand, for diagnosis purpose there is a fancy equipment, doctors advise for that .on other hands they are 4 times costly than in government hospitals.
for example, a research published in a health journal shows that doctors in govt sectors force the patient for a private check-up in order to charge fees. however, they have a directly a good percentage with almost all pharmaceuticals company and diagnosis service provider.
in conclusion, ever one should be conscious about the cost while buying the electronic devices or doing health treatments .before buying they should research and compare costs with other phones before going to market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71279197901 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.3096189762 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.285714286 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173981025436 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06588340314 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609633779241 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989528841019 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839849390352 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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