Some People Prefer to spend their lives, doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing, Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
It is certainly true that changes in a rutine life is good for mental health. Many people believe that to spend their whole life doing same thing and nothing new and adventurous in their life while others believe that change is a key to reach on a success level. I personally believe that to change in a life is essential.
To begin with, Certain amount of people are prefer to stick in one thing and they do not try to other activities and skills. The reason is that mainly people has been a fear of getting fail in life and what people are thinking about change and these thing are affects most of the people. Many people who love to stability in their life because they create their own comfort zone and they don't like to change in routine life. Sometimes it is financially beneficial to stick on one job for a life.
However, Others believe that we must try to new things, experiments and new skills in life. Because they get easily bored to stick one place for a life. To changing a job, They gain knowlegde and practical skills. Their mind is always active to make new ideas and learning new things. They are really good in every field and get good results and have a knowlede of all the fields.
Moreover, This prevents them from learning and identifying thir hidden talent and skills, What's more, The progress and The success in life are often achieved when a person tries to explore new ideas and practices, Which might be beneficial for the improvement of their life.
In conclusion, It is a heated argument whether people must remai[n to the conservative ways of life or resot to modern trends. I believe that the ideology of success can be reached if people will embarace the new-fangled ways of living in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59163987138 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35802494364 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514469453376 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8950691087 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22139579431 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817389188719 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693683276054 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123350760341 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091329019055 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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