Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Plenty of people consider that advertising is considerably luckiness at convincing us to take things. Other people believe that advertising is so general that we no longer pay careness to it.
Now, it is significant advertisement around the world of marketing. Their basical purpose persuading people which their products quality is well. A lot of time, we can see televison, mobile phones and probably hear several types of advertisement by radio. Actually, it is revealed that people pay attention any more where is seen their products adverticing. Even though it has been achieving seccessfull to sell things, many people do not attention advertising long time. This is why if people see to repeat the same ones again and again, they are not interesting their product afterwards.
In my view, both of points clearly thought by different jobs' owners. I think that advertisement is the best way which achieve the successfull.
Why advertising obtain luckiness in the world?
There are different type of reasons, for instance, sweets' advertisement agency might sell all of production. This is why their ones are gradually higher quality and it is the best advertisement theirs. Therefore i totally disagree that people no longer and longer pay attention to it.
In conclude, advertisement is improving day by day when advertisor try to appear new ones. Around the world, the best production is manufactured everywhere and increasing demand this .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nd it is the best advertisement theirs. Therefore i totally disagree that people no longe...
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Line 6, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed everywhere and increasing demand this .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28138528139 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03515617528 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8045041147 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372504132017 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119486667417 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100816832315 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183593808246 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131540087998 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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