Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is commonly suggested that advertising is highly effective in making people purchase a variety of goods. However, others view advertising as normal practice, thus, individuals nowdays disregard its importance. This essay examines both views and concludes that the significance of advertising cannot be over-emphasised, as it attracts buyers by showcasing the exquisite features of a product.
Admittedly, advertising is a proven method of convincing potential customers to purchase different products and I agree, because it presents the target audience with the merits and features of a potential product. Furthermore, placing adverts can act as a reminder to customers about the product brand and perhaps a strategy to secure the loyalty of customers. Hence, the ideology of advertising will entice more buyers and invariably lead to more sales and increased popularity of a product. For instance, I saw a car advert online in 2019 and bought it because i was convinced by its excellent features, thus, a direct result from product promotion.
Despite the aforementioned powerful impacts of advertising, many in todays society see this as a usual thing, hence, underestimating its relevance. This means that individuals buy goods and services that fits the prescription of their needs and advertising plays less of role in their decision-making. In addition, it is believed that people will always buy a product, so far it fits into the needs of the society, hence, this mindset underates the value of advertising.
In conclusion, while some people see adverts as a common practice and tend to ignore its vital role, as they believe individuals will always purchase a product, provided it meets required demands. Overall, advertising is crucial because it shows a potential customer the advantages of using a product and its characteristics.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...heir decision-making. In addition, it is believed that people will always buy a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22817338367 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8612443085 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161468731599 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064230735883 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461654411388 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108231020552 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607200731643 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs and invariably lead to more sales and increased popularity of a product. For i...
^^
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rt online in 2019 and bought it because i was convinced by its excellent features...
^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir decision-making. In addition, it is believed that people will always buy a p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22817338367 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8612443085 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161468731599 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064230735883 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461654411388 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108231020552 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607200731643 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.