The importance of art, in modern days, has always been a controversial topics. A school of thoughts argue that different types of art, such as painting, music and poetry are accessible for the mass, whereas some would delegate those subjects only to people with extraordinary skills. The following paragraphs will take a bird-eye view over these two argumentative stances.
Firstly, it is common fact that everything has different angles and aspects, which in turn makes people's perspectives toward art varied wildly. Therefore, each artistic creation would uniquely represent its creator's aesthetic taste and views. The other determinant that contributes to the accessibility of art is the well-developed education system. Primary schoolers and secondary students have been familiarized with art classes and music lessons that they no longer see art itself as an alienated subject. Furthermore, laymen and adults could start their own artistic journey with online courses with relatively affordable price and flexible learning hours, which ensures that art are, easier than ever, accessible.
However, this field requires long hours of focus and commitment to finish a piece of art, which would drive out the motivation of any beginner. Even more, the gifted would have and edge on creating arts that it costs them way less time to finish with more efficiency. One more thing to fence off people from trying art is that only well-known and established artists could make a fortune out of their products, while the average, which the majority are, would struggle to make a living.
In short, art is becoming more reachable overtime with the help of the developing education system and technology, however, people would need to think thoroughly before deciding to take art as a serious career choice.
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- In many countries the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse What causes this problem What measure can be taken to solve it 67
- Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school It would be a good idea to adopt this system for men and possibly women To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Task 2 Today parents spend little free time with their children Why is it the case Who are more affected parents or children 89
- Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school It would be a good idea to adopt this system for men and possibly women To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'topic'?
Suggestion: topic
...n days, has always been a controversial topics. A school of thoughts argue that differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32631578947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75199583414 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656140350877 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0418574795 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153411953785 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557889526469 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455793414012 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989965690557 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040608323281 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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