Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Public well-being is essential pillar of a modern society. While a group of people advocate that the best way of settling a viable community is proliferating the number of sport buildings, others concern that this is not enough to build a healthy community, so alternative measurements should be taken. The essay will discuss both aspects and will draw a conclusion.
On the one hand, sports help body to regain its shapes and health. In other words, sportive activities increase blood circulation, leads to release of hormones and eventually, strength and shape the body. For example, during the era of president Obama, he started a smart campaign to fight against obesity which was jeopardizing the public health. The first and foremost method to combat with this matter was introducing more public sports facilities which affords many people to have a slim, well-built body. Hence, sports might prevent some public illness.
On the other hand, every citizens cannot be sportive activities due to the coincidental health problems such as heart disease or paraplegia. To put simply, many people especially older ones are reluctant to join the sportive activities either their fragile body structures or accompanying severe diseases. A case in this point, smoking is a unhealthy habit that mainly captive the young generations who develops severe health problems within the time. To tackle with this public health problem, it is obvious that increasing just sportive amenities will not be enough. As a result of this, others options such as prohibition of tobacco or put an age limit for buying it should be considered. Hence, other ways of improving people health are needed undoubtfully.
In conclusion, despite according to some people, broadening the sports facilities might be a best solution to improve citizens health, others believe that it is not enough and various measures ought to be in the portfolios. In my opinion, although sports might be a good option to improve people health, it should be supported with other measurements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26219512195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79273618013 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.965898519 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298266789227 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101361024511 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534129143361 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18169113946 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105712092566 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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