Some people say that the best way to improve public heath is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are require
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion
Public health is one of the important social issues that success or failure of government can be judged with. Nowadays, however, public health is in danger due to unhealthy life style of people, among them, lack of exercise has been mentioned as one of the most contributor. Therefore, many people argue if sport facilities are accessible for more people public health will rise. Others, on the other side, put forth counter arguments and believe more than sport facilities are needed to boost public health. In this essay I will discuss both sides and will give my opinion.
Firstly, the accessibility of sport facilities like sport equipment, athletic fields are paramount. For example, in IRAN there are not many parks and sport clubs which could be used for working out. In a city like Tehran, there are few sport clubs in every area which are not affordable especially for lower income citizens. Secondly, existence of sport equipment in public places like parks may motivate and catch people’s attention to exercise because many people might learn from others for example how to use the equipment.
Turing on to the second group who believes in the essentially of extra steps, merely existence of the sport facilities might not scale up public health because there are various kinds of influential factors contributing in public health. For example, receiving required nutrition, having enough sleep and reducing stress and anxiety and so forth are also considerably important which should be provided by governments through mass media for raising awareness on the importance of exercise in health, providing food baskets which contain the basic needs (carbohydrates, oil, vitamins, protein and fiber), and subsidized sport clubs for lower income families.
To recapitulate and give my opinion, in addition to providing sport facilities for citizens, governments should support their citizen for more basic elements of healthy life style like job creation, fighting with poverty, providing education for more people etc. which paly directly or indirectly their roles in healthy life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the importance of exercise in health, providing food baskets which contain the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32831325301 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62648357181 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2280352534 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197683028834 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082172361067 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547579359311 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124105138859 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687327580394 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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