SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE MAIN ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEM OF OUR TIME IS THE LOSS OF PARTICULAR SPECIES OF PLANTS AND ANIMALS. Others SAY THAT THERE ARE MORE IMPORTANT ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS.
DISCUSS BOTH AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
The symbiotic relationship between human and other species is responsible for the balance of our ecosystem. Some believe that the prime complication of the advanced world is the decimated number of many species, including plants and animals, whereas others consider that there are far more important issues other than this. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain the significances of their conservation.
As far as the environmental issues are concerned, there are numerous issues which required to be addressed; however, the priority needs to be decided. Current scenario of the environment includes many catastrophic complications such as green house effect, drought, deforestation, which are still under control. As we can reverse the ramifications of them by adopting few multifaceted approaches. Even though they are consider as intimidating, their effect can be reversed and prevented. That is why, it is a smart choice to focus on something that is unreversible.
On the other side, effects of the extinction are not only long lasting but also unpreventable. Indeed, the food chain is very delicate that a minute change can disturb it, which directly immbalances our environment. In China, For instance, the rate of pandas is declining with the reduction of small animals by hunting and over-farming. These small creatures are the basic source of food for pandas and the decreased number of them leads pandas to face the starvation. It means if one type of living things is wiped out from the earth, it will affect on the survival of other species. Moreover, it is unreversible as once animal died out we can not bring them back to the life. Even though genetic cloning is anticipated to solve these problems, it has not shown any successful results yet.
Overall, despite the number of issues we have on list to solve, the effects of extinction are far more threatening as they are unreversible. Unlike other issues which can be repaired, this complication can lead us to the mass extinction hence, effective and practical solution are needed on the emergency basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2100591716 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00034573128 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9888761364 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.588235294 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119562353334 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338506926238 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423087204671 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758907607661 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686800197703 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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