Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that many species of animals and plants are vanishing and some of them have already did. And hence, some people argue that this is the major issue, while others believe that there are other environmental problems which are of more significance. I believe that problems regarding species extinction are more prominent than others.
There are many reasons why several species of flora and fauna are considered to be the main issue nowadays. Since humans are interfering nature and wildlife habitats to meet their needs for food and shelter. As a result of this, poaching and deforestation is causing these species to be on the brink of extinction and many of which have already faded out. For instance, a bird 'dodo' has disappeared completely from the wildlife and others such as Koalas (Australian) and tigers are also in the queue. Furthermore, it is affecting food chains and leading to the loss of biodiversity, as if one group will disappear, others are also going to be affected by it.
Although, some people believe that there are some other more savere problems in the environment. They are such as global warming and air pollution (caused due to traffic problems). Explaining it further, global warming which takes place when Co2 gets trapped in the atmosphere due to the greenhouse affect, is accelerating global temperatures and pollution is taking a heavy toll on people's health. Hence, these are considered to be encountered by people almost everyday. Because of this, they admit that these are more vital issues to look at.
To conclude, there are convincing arguments both for and against which are more savere environmental problems. I believe that loss of a particular species of animals and plants are more significant to goggle at.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...vanishing and some of them have already did. And hence, some people argue that this...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are also going to be affected by it. Although, some people believe that there are som...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ered to be encountered by people almost everyday. Because of this, they admit that these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, regarding, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04109589041 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73861278753 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6957361992 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265543781845 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940094408536 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978850792183 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182038385408 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911025478301 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.