Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your ow

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Leaning a foreign language has become an integral part of everyday life. There are those who say that learning a foreign language is needed for working and traveling abroad however others believe that there are more other reasons to learn a new language. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.

Traveling and working in other countries are the key reasons for learning a foreign language. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favor of learning a foreign language is due to working in other countries. Some people prefer to build their professional career in abroad. That's why they need to be sound in the foreign language. In other words, language proficiency is seen as an important parameter as it helps to communicate with other officials efficiently. As a result, the employee holds a better position in a short period of time. Furthermore,traveling is another reason for learning a foreign language. A good illustration of this is that if someone intends to travel to any English speaking country, he needs to know the English language for communicating purposes. In other words, people must have the ability to express their views and understand the queries of foreigners in certain situations.

Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that there are more other reasons for learning a foreign language. The prime reason why people intend to learn a second language is because it broadens our horizon of knowledge. By learning other country's languages, we can understand their culture and tradition. As a result, it enriches our knowledge about a foreign country. Secondly, knowing a foreign language is needed for doing business with foreign companies. Since the world expands like a global village, the business has become easier than before. So, if we want businesses with foreign enterprises, we have to learn their language well.

Finally, I would say learning a foreign language is not only necessary for working and travelling abroad but also there are more other reasons behind this.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09970674487 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80582795511 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504398826979 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6676722611 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.95 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546431692044 0.244688304435 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175037021788 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131226590298 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374037254224 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315871140411 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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