Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's fast-paced world, advertising has become one of the most effective methods to promote an upcoming goods and new release products. In other words, the acts of bringing up a product have been significantly developed in comparison to how they were in the past, especially the ones which target teenagers and children. However, it is thought that advertisements whose aim is at young adults should be eradicated. From my perspective, I totally agree with the given statement due to the negative influences on the children's mental and physical health as well as the finances of their family which can be caused by the mentioned type of adversiting.
To begin with, there is a number of opinions suggest the contrary. In detail, some people contradict that by doing so may result in a degradation of a product because of the lack of young customers. Therefore, the economy of one's nation will on the verge of declining. For instance, chocolate and fast food industries depend greatly on teengers and children. Had it not been for the sophisticated strategy of marketing that aimed at young kids, these industries would not become such successful as they are at the momment.
On the other hand, prevent children-specified advertisings could incredibly benefit many families that have a low-budget income and the children themselves. Marketing is known for its complexity, therefore, it has a tendency of manipulating young adults to buy or make them ask for more money from their parents to be able to afford those goods. Fast food for example, which is not only cause health problem such as obesity, cancer, etc, but they also consume a huge amount of money because of how adversitings stimulate one being's emotion of their new desserts or new combos, which eventually cost you even more money.
In summary, the acts of bringing up new release goods can be benefical in some aspects. However, in the long run, the negative effects are observable: financial budget and physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04242424242 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9065708782 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5043850662 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19344558469 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061534693365 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604764534658 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107114436662 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408326642043 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.