Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Which subjects should be included in the curriculum at tertiary education seems to be a topic of controversy. While a school of thought hold that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas related to their future career, another one claims that they should be at liberty to study whatever they like. Personally, I side with the latter view.
It is understandable why some people support the opinion that the view of studying subjects such as science and technology, which will be useful for the future. Firstly, these course will provide more employment opportunities for graduates with better salaries, and therefore, students after graduation can have a higher quality of life. Secondly, society can benefit from a youthful labor source in key subject area. They are well-educated, creative and physically strong which fuels new invention, economic growth and greater future prosperity.
However I am convinced that choosing which subjects to learn at university should be freedom of students. If students are passionate about what they are learning, they will pay attention to lessons and grasp more knowledge and skill. Besides, the freedom to pursue the subject we like creates a diversity of employees, not only in science and technology, but also in art, business, tourism and other sectors. A healthy economy needs such variety. Finally, nobody can predict which areas of knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical and technology skills. If this were the case, perhaps we could need more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or technology.
In conclusion, despite some arguments for university to force students to some particular subjects they think useful in years ahead, I advocate the autonomy to choose whichever we like to learn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ative and physically strong which fuels new invention, economic growth and greater future pro...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...growth and greater future prosperity. However I am convinced that choosing which subj...
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Message: Did you mean ''?
...bjects to learn at university should be freedom of students. If students are passionate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19934640523 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73390380171 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7961395051 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437283067088 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126867410227 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936080808852 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251924665171 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593653211123 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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