In nowaday's highly competitive market, taking into consideration a career path the sooner the better will keep a vital role in the future. And the issue as to whether all campus students should experience subjects they would like to want or having a prejudice about those who think that just be allowed to study subjects in relation to academic expertises typically as science or technology has remained a source of controversy. Personally, I would analysis two opposing opinions to clarify this essay.
On the one hand, There has several reasons for youngsters to pursue a passionate career. They don't have the anachronism of their spirits to impose compulsory subjects like at school. Firstly, pursuing a subject of interest will optimize the possibilities in flexibility and recognitive thinking, simultaneously, they could also discover their own strengths and developing these skills sustainably to have been the widespread of wanted career path. Besides, Youngsters, who always have a open-minded thinking in lifestyle will create an energetic lifestyle and For those having a passion in themselves, An undeniable fact that they will be certainly successfull on their chosen way.
In term of remained opinion, I will fairly side with this notion because of its priorities as well as many advantageous impacts. With nowaday's knowledge-based society, most of school's principles initially propose and give a indoctrination which related to academic subjects such as technology or science. Those are the subjects that require high analytical and thought-proking skills. it decides whether you will how have or not a prospect career in the future is completely depend on each people's comprehension. Besides, their chosen profession in accordance with social needs will create a huge of opportunities to commit themselves for an international organisation, covering daly expenses efficiently or go on a tertiary education after graduation.
In conclusion, It can be appear as some counterproductive conflicts from those who divided into two these angles, so I wholeheartedly believe that Choosing to study suitable subjects to their abilities, interests or knowledge-related subjects to serve society always bring them with advantageous merits and benefits for themselves
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays highly competitive market, taking into ...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...vital role in the future. And the issue as to whether all campus students should experience s...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ers to pursue a passionate career. They dont have the anachronism of their spirits t...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir spirits to impose compulsory subjects like at school. Firstly, pursuing a subj...
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Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h. Besides, Youngsters, who always have a open-minded thinking in lifestyle will ...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s principles initially propose and give a indoctrination which related to academi...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... analytical and thought-proking skills. it decides whether you will how have or no...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...pect career in the future is completely depend on each peoples comprehension. Besides,...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57514450867 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2988629722 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615606936416 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1285997849 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.384615385 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282113185029 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830642000281 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920153154747 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166127200472 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623259448674 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays highly competitive market, taking into ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...vital role in the future. And the issue as to whether all campus students should experience s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ers to pursue a passionate career. They dont have the anachronism of their spirits t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir spirits to impose compulsory subjects like at school. Firstly, pursuing a subj...
^^
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h. Besides, Youngsters, who always have a open-minded thinking in lifestyle will ...
^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s principles initially propose and give a indoctrination which related to academi...
^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... analytical and thought-proking skills. it decides whether you will how have or no...
^^
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...pect career in the future is completely depend on each peoples comprehension. Besides,...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57514450867 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2988629722 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615606936416 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1285997849 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.384615385 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282113185029 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830642000281 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920153154747 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166127200472 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623259448674 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.