Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.Others believe hat they should only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views and gi

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.Others believe hat they should only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Stepping into the 21st century,when people are entitled to a wide range of state-of-the-art approaches to broaden their horizon, how to choose a subject has a sparked controversy.It is commonly believed that university student have to study subject that they like. Others think they only study that subject can be useful in the future
As far as I am concerned, I side with the later standpoint

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 334.0 1615.20841683 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 66.0 315.596192385 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.85026988277 4.20363070211 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13325127376 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 51.0 176.041082164 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.772727272727 0.561755894193 138% => OK
syllable_count: 103.5 506.74238477 20% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.06120827912 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2731474229 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200729521961 0.084324248473 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0129119999651 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148881803497 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148881803497 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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