Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
<p class="MsoNormal">Some people think that art is an inseparable part of the
education system. However, others think that studying art is time-consuming,
and children should not pay full attention to that subject. While schools are
responsible for providing a wide range of subjects to children to study, we
should not dismiss the role of arts. </p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The most common reason among people, who argue that studying
art is a waste of time for children is that it does not provide any academic
knowledge and experience. Instead, they should concentrate on academic subjects
such as mathematics or science, which enable them to develop a better
understanding of certain fields and lay foundations for later careers. Also,
art subjects might not guarantee a decent job because most artists today are
struggling from selling their products.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">However, apart from the reason expressed above, I believe
that people should not underestimate art values. Most importantly, they benefit
the development of a whole child across social, cognitive, and emotional
domains. For example, if children, besides learning mathematics and science,
spend their time participating in art courses or art exhibitions, their
creativity and imagination will be boosted. Therefore, children would become
more knowledgeable and perform better in class. Besides, participating in art
activities is also an ideal way for children to relax themselves and better
concentrate in class, especially after studying hours.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, although some people claim that art is often
pointless, I believe that they have a long-lasting effect on the development
and performance of a child in the future.</p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06976744186 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.56603624361 2.80592935109 163% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.686626246 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.0 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254597346699 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112410902087 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781623325049 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666498234051 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719720406336 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.52 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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