In the contemporary world Graduation is a rudimentary need of any individual in a developing country, some believe that success does not totally depend upon one's highest qualification. This essay will explore ideas for both the notions and aid the readers to reach at a conclusion by my opinion
To embark on, To initiate a decent career individuals must and should have a degree, As it is very rare that employers hire on the basis of skills and talent. for instance, every multinational company performs rigorous short listing of candidates on the basis of skills and experience while hiring where education is imperative. Besides getting employed in a company, folks also depict a person's reputation on the basis of their final qualification, however in the present time there is no much difference between a literate and a graduate because a person who has learnt to speak and write languages is strongly expected to pursue a degree at least a graduation in literature itself.
On the other hand, even if people attain a degree they should face a relatively long struggle period, As most of the reputed companies do not hire freshers in order to maintain systematic growth, therefore people should work in smaller firms before with a bare minimum salary package. Longer struggle period is one of the myriad drawbacks of ending up in an employment sector, where as only half of the world is dependent on this sector, the other half of the earning people belong to business class, self employed and the rest are investors. A person does not require a degree to enter either of these categories well in fact most of the employees want to leap into either if these categories to attain financial freedom and spare time.
To conclude, Although having degree is imperative for an individual living in a modern society , I opine that success does not totally depend on one's qualification whereas it depends on how opportunist one is and how does he leverage a situation given to him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as for, at least, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83630952381 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72768303652 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 336.0 20.2975951904 1655% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1625.0 106.682146367 1523% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 336.0 20.7667163134 1618% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 123.0 7.06120827912 1742% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981270772659 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981270772659 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606569526555 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404772599731 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.4 13.0946893788 1294% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -269.56 50.2224549098 -537% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.3 11.3001002004 1188% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.2 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.4 10.1190380762 1348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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