Some people think that children should aim their best at what they are doing. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that children should focus on doing what they best in any circumstances, while others have an opposite idea. Personally, I think this has included both advantages and disadvantages, and this essay will provide suitable reasons with explains and examples.
There are lots of positive impacts on children who just need to aim their best. First of all, It is true that when kids focus on one thing they are truly good at, they will easy to understand the field that they are experts. This helps them know their ability closely and creates a high opportunity to chase higher achievements on that subject. For example, many children who have inborn talent about playing sports and if they keep learning to improve their skill, they will become famous athletes in the future. Moreover, children will never feel tired or bored and they always interested while learning more about their talent, because this is their best. This encourages them to study with full potential and breaks their limits to a whole new level.
On the other hand, there are still drawbacks to this opinion. The first negative impact is they might be feared other subjects, which are very hard for them to study. Furthermore, If kids just only pick up their favorite subject, they will have less time to learn some soft skills, which is really important for their lives.
In conclusion, despite studying one thing they are best which is extremely good for their's development. However, they can not rely on it and forgot to learn other skills so they should balance between things that are their best and other sources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91911764706 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33281836466 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6931752335 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309305743506 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113764919013 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723741619779 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194903934599 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425698889031 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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