Some people think that computer and internet are important in children study but other think that student can learn effectively in schools with their teachers. Discuss both view and your opinion.
There is no deny that, Advancement of technology increasing day by day which is lucrative for students. Some opine that pupils learn well with the help of teachers, Here, I would like to accord my views with both sides of technology and teachers.
There are manifold point to share up my views, First and foremost, the precence of teacher in the class is always lucrative to uplift the standard of of society to exemplify, student can solve their problem to discussing with their teachers in the class. With the help of teachers they can easily learn about their study. If they face any problem they learn how to tackled with problem as well as teacher taught them about an lifestyle. Moreover, if a student communicate with their teacher they are stimulated. As a result teacher is pillar of our society and without study student are like a bird without wings.
Furthermore, computer and internet are very important for learner. Everyone is addicted to use internet. With the help of internet student learn their work as visual activity. They easily solve their study problem thought internet student get a lot of information and knowledge according to their study. In this system they not have any type of restriction of time. Addition to it, in any time or any where they easily found their confusion related to their study. In computer student can save their data easily in computer memory as their need. In computer the data which is saved pupils can use it any time.
To conclude with, everyone have different mentality and both are beneficial for students and also without they can not increase their confident level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89891696751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47749715524 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0411939681 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281836161836 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106028389085 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066124373632 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166970694339 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345386059249 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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