Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since the internet is significantly developed from the past, it effects the changes of society and relationships between people.Many people use the internet as a bridge to connect their relationships. On the other hand, this technology can also make some communities become isolated.
The major purpose of the internet is to keep data and deliver it to receivers all around the world. The information such as texts, files and photos are preserved in the online network, which means we can keep these things as long as we require. Therefore, many people keep their precious memory of their beloved in their social media, doing this makes them feel that they are not separated, either their beloved are somewhere in the world or have passed away. Apart from that, we can submit it to recipients no matter how far away they are. From this benefit, it is convenient to communicate with people from overseas or different countries. That’s why they alway feel close wherever they are.
In other perspective, new technology like the internet can disturb the communities between people. Due to it’s multifunction, people start to find many interesting things apart from communication with online society, they will be dominated by the impact of social media. Furthermore, High rate of social media obsession in some people makes them forget about reality. They forget their friends, family, and almost everythings around them. Online addiction continues to make cracks in the relationships little by little. From the evidence above, being too addicted to online society worsen the closeness between people.
In conclusion, people who live far away can feel in touch due to the network of social media. However, it can influence an obstacle in people’s bond and make them more separated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...ociety and relationships between people.Many people use the internet as a bridge to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'to its multifunction'?
Suggestion: to its multifunction
...urb the communities between people. Due to it’s multifunction, people start to find many interesting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21453287197 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73515349522 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.443474504 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157732911042 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536649551573 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472679775344 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117060757071 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406504103004 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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