Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages
It is true that good health care services are a fundamental need that every citizen demands. While there are some drawbacks of private hospital, I still believe that these will be eclipse by the benefits.
On the one hand, the downsides of private health care can not be overlooked. As a matter of fact, patients may suffer from the expensive fees for diagnosis and treatment as the costs for private hospitals to maintain state-of-the- art facilities and employ well-trained doctors are extremely exorbitant, which discourages the underprivileged from enjoying quaility health care services. As a result, only the affluent are able to have access to good health care but those who always struggle to make a living can not afford it. This practice goes against the common belief that everyone, regardless of financial background, in entitiled to medical service.
On the other hand, I still believe that the disadvantages of private clinics can not overshadow the advantages. Private healthcare centers can share responsibilities with state hospitals in taking care of people’s health. With the grapid growth of population, public medical services are unable to solely provide sufficient health care for a large number of patients. Therefore, the widespread presence of private healthcare institutions with facilities greatly mordenised and doctors carefully trained not only supplies people with high quality professional treatment but also solves the problems of overloaded public healthcare systems. For instance, as public-funded healthcare system in Vietnam is becoming overloaded, the appearance of private hospital such as Phap Viet and Hoan My can share responsibilities for easing the pressures of state hospitals.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of the prevalence of private clinics outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61290322581 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16101397536 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6810126948 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266130505628 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107411640099 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624274359513 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167440340188 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427427035997 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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