Some people think healthcare should be made free for all people, while others believe people should pay for healthcare by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is an ongoing debate over the significant expenditure, that health care demands. Some believe that, the governments should take care of the health of people, without asking any money from them, while others argue that an individual should take care of the medical bills. In my opinion, it is one of the logical and moral responsibilities on the part of government, to take care of the well being of its people, and essential medical facilities should be available to all for free.
To begin with, although, spending money for health related matters is a non-productive expense on the government’s part, it should be comprehensively taken care of by them. This is because, individuals are paying high taxes in hope of living a convenient and better life, and efficient medical coverage, is one of the key parameters to enhance the quality of life. Besides that, it is also a moral responsibility of the regulatory authorities, to reduce the sufferings of a person by providing quality medical care, even if that individual is financially unable to pay for it. By failing to do so, there will be increase in the disease burden, which will indirectly affect the growth of entire community and nation. Nevertheless, there are other factors that influence disease burden too, but suitable medical care is a vital determinant.
However, it is vital to establish a guideline, regarding the medical facilities and procedures to be provided for free. Improper planning in this regard will exert significant pressure on the government funds. For instance, it is essential to manage diseases like heart attacks, diabetic coma, and road traffic accident at the earliest, and the government should provide them for free. In contrast, procedures like dental bracing, breast augmentation, or fat removal surgeries, need not to be supported by free healthcare schemes, as none of them are life saving measures. There are numerous examples available, where injudicious use of free healthcare adversely affected the government finances to the extent, that whole system failed to function. The health care reforms in the United States of America is an appropriate example of this misuse, that forced the US government to withdraw many beneficial health care programs for its people.
In conclusion, although free health for all is a key responsibility of governments, yet there is a need of proper distribution of medical budget to avoid exhaustion of such an important and vital facility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much beneficial health', 'a good deal of beneficial health'.
Suggestion: much beneficial health; a good deal of beneficial health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2475 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0567128995 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9234515759 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.933333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22665894225 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754229187886 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595961568796 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138954838244 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053577054204 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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