Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
I strongly believe that boys and girls should not learn in the same schools. Meanwhile, it is also widely thought that they should not learn in mixed schools. Even though, mixed schools might cause some advantages to students, i am of opinion that they should learn in separate schools. This essay will show you why.
First of all, learning together might make the children to fall in love quickly in young ages. As a result, they won’t concentrate on learning, and keep on daydreaming about who they like. Children from age 1 to age 18 should focus on learning, because love is not really necessary for them to think at those ages. For example, a girl at age 12, who never listen to her teachers’ instructions. In class, she was just sitting down, and staring out of the window, thinking of a boy. That is not good.
Secondly, learning in same-sex education might make the students to learn in unatural ways. For instance, when a boy, who is really lazy and dump like a girl. He will try to pretend to be smart and hard-working, but he is not. Moreover, this will make children be uncomfortable, and unconfident.
Last but not least, racism does not happen in same-sex schools. For example, in a class, there is a female teacher as a main teacher. She does not help the boys, but she helps girls.This cause, girls will receive a higher score than boys. In addition, teachers will also teach the boys something not good.
In conclusion, learning separately helps children to concentrate on learning, be confident, and comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85767790262 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70744294552 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2154632598 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2631578947 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0526315789 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168969655587 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524710213392 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668001650296 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088248026077 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553508166896 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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