Some individuals claim that it is more vital to increase greeneries in the available urban spaces than to construct new residencies. This essay agrees that the urban areas require more vegetations than more and more apartment blocks because green cities ensure the well-being of citizens and help to boost the economy.
Greenspace has long been associated with the good physical health of residents. Not only does it improve physical fitness, but helps to maintain a healthy mind. Put simply, trees increase the air quality and reduce pollution, thereby they reduce people’s vulnerability to contract respiratory diseases. Furthermore, green areas, including parks, gardens, woods, lakesides, and sports grounds, cause visual relief and provide a place where people can relax, unwind and socialize; therefore, individuals can relieve their mental stresses. For example, the annual newsletter of the national environmental authority revealed that the residents of the green cities are 80% less prone to get infectious respiratory diseases than the residents of less green cities.
In addition, green cities are more attractive for foreign investors and tourists. In other words, these cities are more economical making real estate highly demanding. On the other hand, cramping more houses into town damages the appearance and it can, thereby, distract potential investors and tourists. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claimed that 95% of the multinational companies are willing to base in greener cities than to the other urban areas.
In conclusion, some people contend that it is worth increasing the number of trees in cities than building new houses. This essay agrees with this opinion because it helps to stay fit and to boost the economy as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45551601423 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7272931055 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1247276359 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296713303641 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969008039693 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859021736783 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179162119186 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951680607969 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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