Money is the most precious thing which brings happiness in the life of individuals. Many individuals opine that money is the prefect gift for youngsters while others contradict with this statement. I will discuss both views as well as my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
Money plays a beneficial role in the life of juveniles because of certain reasons. To begin with, children get freedom from their parents to spend the money on taking some decisions such as buying notebook, pencil and eraser etcetera. Consequently, it became the adults more responsible and also expert in finance management. For exemplify, a recent study on child's attitude to finance 2014 presents that, if some amount of money is given per week to a child, the response would be planned expenditure in the fourth week as comparison with first week. All in all, this change in perception of finance and efficient planning would definitely help out in the future life of every child.
Moreover, by giving money as a present inspire juniors to save in their piggy banks which encourage not only to collect lump-sum amount of money but also make their future more secure. Furthermore, individuals used gifted money in case of emergency situations such as strike by public buses etcetera when family are unable to do anything. In addition, providing a help to poor human beings as in consideration of money also raise the humanity in the heart of youngsters.
On the other hand, it can be noticed that children are busy agile and fun-loving in nature, who are not physically and mentally mature to take right decision. These juveniles are tender-minder and easily indulge in bad habits like drinking, playing cards and smoking etcetera which brings more crimes in the society in future period. Last but not least, youngsters have spendy nature in their early life. So, the way of thinking changed by receiving money as a gift and they never understand the real meaning of money.
In my opinion, money is not everything. By giving small toys and candies also brings more happiness in the life of juveniles and also make their strong bondings rather than presenting money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...is statement. I will discuss both views as well as my opinion in the upcoming paragraph. ...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buses'' or 'bus's'?
Suggestion: buses'; bus's
...ncy situations such as strike by public buses etcetera when family are unable to do a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00278551532 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6295795755 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590529247911 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8341696453 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212932061066 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654451197759 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557125349977 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122629742941 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561743462277 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.