Some people think the most important thing about being rich is helping other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that if the most important thing for rich people is to help others. I disagree with this idea.
It is reasonable that some people believe that it is important for rich people to help others. With their social status and sufficient finance, they can make the society better. For example, rich people can help children who suffer from famine by providing their enough food to overcome their harsh time. Besides, they can set up charity in order to help people with trouble in fees for medical treatment. However, their behavior of helping others cannot be judged by their wealth. On the contrary, it is their love and concern to the society which make those people be willing to help other disadvantaged.
On the other hand, however, there are other things which are also important. First, in spite of charity, rich people may use money to improve their own living standard, since have enough ability to purchase expensive goods, update their real estate and provide their children a better study environment. Second, developing interest is also important. Rich people have more opportunities to pursue their own interest. Due to less pressure on finance, they can do whatever they like even some hobbies which need plenty of money such as global journey, which has a positive impact on cultivating interest.
To summarize, rich people can make great impacts on the society by using their wealth to help other people. However, they help others due to their care to the society instead of how much money they have; besides, there are still other things which are also important to rich people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, even so, for example, such as, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35321380851 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2576522839 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275032088767 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11710757735 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902150528567 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213512258037 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691302434073 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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