Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Today, having the vastness of financial freedom has provided the wealthy people to do what they want in life. There are those who are of the view that can only open a window for them to use this to their own selfish thought. However, I believe that having the financial wealth ensures the opportunity of providing aid to the poor poor members of the community.
First, these rich individuals can gain a chance to take part in the different charitable causes. Certain philanthropists have a heart to share a small part of what they have and due to the abundance of funding available in their hands, they are able to achieve this mantra. Famous personalities have initiated this move ever since and they have stretched out not only to the people but also to their surroundings thinking that doing something for their environment will benefit them in the long run.
Second, they are able to create developmental programs which help the workers to develop profound knowledge and skills needed to sustain the organizations long term survival. This ensures financial assistance to those under them while their programs gain revenues. For instance, Oprah Winfrey has been making an effort to help the poor girls in an African region by providing them with small income generating activities. With this, she is able to have a chance to reach those that are situated in the remote areas.
Lastly, with all the efforts the rich individuals have made, they are able to obtain a power to influence others to join in the initiative of helping those in need. The recognition they got has given them the chance to continue what they are doing. They gain a wider perspective and able to broaden their perspective on the reality of life that they are facing. As a result, they are able to present their experiences and their realization so that their audience may get interested in making a move and provide a helping hand.
As a whole, having the wealth of life has enabled people to do whatever they desire to buy and do. Although there are some thinks that most of them will abuse this opportunity, I am of the belief that this can lead to them being of help to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: poor
...the opportunity of providing aid to the poor poor members of the community. First, ...
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Line 13, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doing. They gain a wider perspective and able to broaden their perspective on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56781295878 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.373015823 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109287267076 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395536212769 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435020350984 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754049792809 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559590896718 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.