Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about whether the main purpose of education should be education or entertainment. While I accept that museums play important role in the education of people about the culture, heritage, and history of a country, I would argue that museums should try to too keep their visitors entertained.
On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of museums should be educating people. Firstly, it is very important to educate people about the history and culture of their country. Museums are the best places to help people to acquire knowledge about their past and to know how their society was changed through the ages. when people know about their history, they are more likely to appreciate their heritage and promote a sense of patriotism.
On the other hand, I believe that museums should be more entertaining and attractive to the public. Museum and other historical places indeed provide amazing an unforgettable experience for foreign visitors as provide them an opportunity to explore new culture and traditions. However, unfortunately, local people are less tend to visit such places. This mainly is due to the fact that local people have been brought up in their own country and are familiar with their culture and history. Consequently, they may think that there is nothing to discover and consider visiting these places a waste of time and money to pay to see the artworks that they saw before. So museums should be designed to be visually more spectacular and organize regular entertaining cultural events, festivals, and exhibitions to encourage people to visit and help them gain popularity again.
In conclusion, I believe that museums should be both entertaining and educational. It is very important that museums provide visitors enjoyable experience and provide them important information at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19601328904 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77043745136 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524916943522 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6600826659 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396150306573 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14913614246 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915242196059 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248530991601 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448711977207 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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