Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some people think watching the news is very important because all persons can see daily updates of day today happening.however, others believe that it’s waste of time to watch news from TV channels and newspaper
To begin with,Some Mortals I reckon that it’s waste of time or reason that, some news channels are showing wrong information which is not related to people lives or condition. Those channels or under of corruption they are paid by the government for hiding some serious matt mortals reckon that it’s waste of time or reason that, some news channels are showing wrong information which is not related to people lives or condition. Those channels or under of corruption they are paid by government for hiding some serious matters of public. The politician Buy some news channel with the help of bribery. To exemplify, in these days farmers of whole country are facing very big problem regarding their crops. The government of India is not paying right price for their crops. Farmer protest against this situation unity of farmers blocked all the roads and demanding for their own rights. However, the sold-out news channels are not showing this situation in front of public
On the other hand, all the news channels are not bad or fake. There are many new station which shows correct information. As we know the power of media is very big. It can do everything for people rights. Moreover, the legal information people will get from some good channels is Very useful for masses.To exemplify, nowadays all countries are facing very big trouble of COVID-19 Coronavirus it is very rampant disease and it hard to prevent in all countries. Through the TV channels and newspaper individual can know about how much patient in their city ,state or country.The journals and newspaper tells the public about the symptoms of this virusAnd also show that precautions to avoid this disease. Which TV station want to speakBravely on public matters and problems these channels are mostly threat by corrupt government
To conclude, I am totally disagree with that point which you think reading and watching news wasting of time. Because, it depend on us how we think about it. If people watch good TV channel which the public problems very seriously. So, the lot of knowledge masses get from those channels
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, i reckon, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97157622739 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52340631005 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470284237726 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.008546348 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.176470588 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268160509954 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838600364094 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974314706203 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212833359993 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849140868149 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.