We are going through the Information Age, which started in the 20th century and knew as Media Age. Therefore, information has extremely high significance in the modern world. Presently, some part of people prefers learning news from newspapers. By contrast, others think that online media is better than paper sources. This essay agrees that online media is more beneficial to mankind.
On the one hand, most newspapers belong to strictly organized, well-known media companies. Articles printed by them reflect comparatively more trustworthy information. Moreover, reading newspapers makes people look elegant and well-educated. Furthermore, newspapers are completely safe for human health, while too much use of online media can cause some eye problems.
On the other hand, there are unlimited amounts of online media sources that belong to completely different organizations. Therefore, everyone can find an article that is suitable for his or her thoughts and interests. Furthermore, it is easy to access online media sources. The distance between a consumer and the source is just a few clicks on the mobile phone or keyboard. Additionally, people can learn news about different countries from their own media companies, which is not possible for printed ones. What is more, there is a price of newspapers, while you do not have to pay any of the online sources.
To conclude, it is undeniable that both sides have their own importance. However, I still believe that online media has more benefits such as fast and easy access to extremely high amounts of sources of different countries and free of charge use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30350194553 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87003426825 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2559401593 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1764705882 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24851809435 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732700327094 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495740095895 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146522757062 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357194294844 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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